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October 03, 2006

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Lane Ditto

I really liked how you added another picture of Catlin's and gave a link to a short biography. It shows you did your research!

In further posts, make sure you check for typos. Instrument is spelled wrong in the second paragraph. The third paragraph seems to be full of quotes and though they seem to prove your point, I think it needs more of your perspective. Lastly, the conclusion seems weak. I would try to bulk it up a bit and make sure to end it nicely. The last sentence leaves the reader hanging. Hope this is helpful:)

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